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dangermousieI am watching the Tess-intro ep, and I am sorry to report, ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
thelana that I loathe her already and she hasn't even put any moves on Max. It's the face and the voice and the mannerisms. Sort of low-class, vulgar version of Valley Girl. Ugh. It will be fun to hate her.
On an unrelated note (except in terms of annoyance), how about this phrase?
Ariane parted her legs, feeling the velvety tip of his hardened shft tease against her feminine core.
This is from a PUBLISHED novel, one I was trying to read. If I read this in fanfic, I'd just laugh, but in a book that someone paid money for? Mind boggles. Who did the author sleep with to get this published, I want to know...
thelana that I loathe her already and she hasn't even put any moves on Max. It's the face and the voice and the mannerisms. Sort of low-class, vulgar version of Valley Girl. Ugh. It will be fun to hate her.On an unrelated note (except in terms of annoyance), how about this phrase?
Ariane parted her legs, feeling the velvety tip of his hardened shft tease against her feminine core.
This is from a PUBLISHED novel, one I was trying to read. If I read this in fanfic, I'd just laugh, but in a book that someone paid money for? Mind boggles. Who did the author sleep with to get this published, I want to know...
